Most “About” pages are just plain boring. They don't grab You. They don't talk to You. They look like course catalog descriptions. Most follow this formula: Credentials, Time in Field (yawn), Awards, Key Achievements. Snore. You want to relate right away. Maybe try something like this instead:
I never thought a divorce lawyer
could bring me this kind of peace in my life.
David is all about giving people a new lease on life. There's nothing he finds so satisfying as helping people like You untangle themselves from the years of pain and anguish a bad marriage can bring.